--- loncom/html/adm/help/tex/General_Intro.tex	2002/11/12 22:36:38	1.1
+++ loncom/html/adm/help/tex/General_Intro.tex	2004/11/12 16:31:55	1.4
@@ -1,28 +1,30 @@
 \label{General_Intro}
 \section*{Introduction}
-Helpscreens like this one will be available a certain points across the system.
-You can recognize them by the blue question mark symbol.
+Help screens like this one will be available at certain points in the system.
+You will recognize them by the blue question mark symbol.
 
 After you log into LON-CAPA, you will see a list of roles which you currently
 have in the system.
 
-You will also see a little window on the site, which is the so-called Remote
-Control.  A good arrangement of the windows will be to have both the 
+You will also see a little window on the site, which is called the Remote
+Control. A good arrangement of the windows will have the 
 Remote Control and the content window available next to each other. To get
-a description of the shorthand buttons on the Remote Control, you can press 
-the blue ``Extended Display'' button.
+a description of the shorthand buttons on the Remote Control, you can click 
+the blue \textbf{EXTENDED DISPLAY} button.
 
-You probably want to select a certain role, for example that of being a student
-in a certain course.
+On the screen listing your roles, you will want to select a certain role. Example: the student role
+in a certain course. 
+(hit the \textbf{Select} button next to the course you want to enter).
 \section*{Navigating a Course}
 You can move forward and backward in the content with the respective buttons 
-in  the Remote Control (the small extra window that comes up). 
-You can press the NAV (``Navigate Content'') button to quickly move to a page 
+in  the Remote Control. 
+You can press the \textbf{NAV} (``Navigate Content'') 
+button to quickly move to a page 
 in the course.
 \section*{Homework}
 Your course might offer online homework. You can identify homework by the
 colorful symbols (yellow - available; green - solved; red - past due) in the
-NAV screen. You might have
+\textbf{NAV} screen. You might have
 more than one try to solve a homework problem, and the system 
 stores all attempts.
 
@@ -31,7 +33,8 @@ Please write down this number in your re
 solved the homework.
 \section*{Communication}
 LON-CAPA has built-in communication support. You can send messages regarding 
-the course content using the FDBK (``Feedback'') button in the Remote Control. 
+the course content using the \textbf{FDBK} (``Feedback'') 
+button in the Remote Control. 
 You can choose different categories of feedback, including a contribution to 
 the course discussion. 
 
@@ -41,7 +44,8 @@ Course discussions are page-specific bul
 the page that you are viewing. You can choose to post anonymously, in which 
 case only the course faculty can see your name.
 
-To send internal email, or look at replies to your feedback, use the COM 
+To send internal email, or look at replies to your feedback, use the 
+\textbf{COM} 
 (``Communication'') button.
 
 Please use the built-in communication rather than normal email, since it